Morning bliss
As the sky weightlessly lifts up its curtains The suns bright lights slowly weaves themselves into my eyes Oh, another beautiful morning has arrived But where is this music coming from that Sounds so...
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i love the sky, i love morning sun, i love the morning breeze more than anything, and my b/f lives far away.. illu, did u wrote this piece for me? <]:9)
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**sigh** Every verse of this shimmers in a radiance that renders those blessed to read the words in meltdown.... Quote:My thoughts and dreams are ringing bells Playing on flutes with beating drums And...
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Crystalline clarity that shines brightly within this piece. That ending line is magnetic. Stunning read Donna!
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Quite a religious feeling in the end. It's really beautiful._________________________________________________ Musann The Fields Café de la Paix USA ...Read More
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I feel like I just saw the world open up before me, and it is glorious... *smile* Very beautiful Tix, and a pleasure to feel... Bri~ From Bri to Dawn *Our love is Our song*
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how glorious a view, two souls melding together in sleep-state....daybreak is a beautiful time for me, so I adore relishing in the appearance of this...and know it's isolation too well another...
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"Oh, my dear lover! Did your sacred soul just think of me Again?" It makes me wish there was a reply to it. What did she have to say? LOL! Great scribe, yet again, Illu.
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You guys are so sweet! ~smiles~ This poem is so close to my heart because it will always remind me for that morning when I woke up and I was so happy because I knew someone was thinking about me.. I...
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So amazing dear friend..as if you were the "king of Romance"....!!!!!very sweet lines.. Iris Rose
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it is lovely to think about and to have such a person in one's life who shares such feelings....i am impressed....your writing is always so tender.... alexis
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Mmmmm..a lovers mind-meld..that's a wonderful feeling isn't it.. Beautiful poem tix, Hugs Sky
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"king of Romance" ~smiles~ you are toooo sweet Iris Rose "it is lovely to think about and to have such a person in one's life who shares such feelings" yes indeed... dw Thanks sky ~hugs~
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I am an olde poet....maybe not in age but in romance and meaning...language and chilvary I dunno I was goingto quote you but... no need, it's a whole poem re-read meaning, I think this rocks hugs...
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This made me think of Romeo upon awakening. Or the lovers of Casanova. Anyway, well written, and exhuberant! Quote:The calm, Cool face of the river Asked me for a kiss. ~Langston Hughes
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morning bliss to me used to be an erection and a place to put it, now it's a cup of coffee and riding to work on my motorcycle, funny how at my age everything relates to gas....Lmao seriously, this...
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Delightfully romantic, dear poet!! So happy she in fact had the wisdom to say 'yes'!
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Quote:Singing Laughing My heart blooms, opens to the world Just as a rose on Suns playground To capture every glimpse of this moment Hi illu! Your title is glorious and verses...even more so. Bravo!!...
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